Sour worm poem

This is my Sour worm poem and all the senses we used:

We were studying the lollies so that we could use our five senses:
Hear:
Crystal Crunch
Rustling
See:
Soft shimmering
Colours
Feel:
Sandpaper
Ruff
Potholes on a road
Long
Taste:
Sour
Bittersweet
Gummy
Tangy
Smell:
Sweet
Yummy