Monday 23 May 2016

A Poem about how nature changes. By Frida


With a single water drop that twinkles in the dawn,
Where a single bird calls from high in the tree,
And frost covers the ground, 
The wind howls a song into the cool night air.


A soft blow picks up the clouds and batters them far to the north.

A deer walks past and leaves fresh tracks,
A small baby deer bounces behind and bonks into his mother.
She grunts and walks a little faster.
Its close to winter now so the deer are traveling the chipmunks are Finding nuts and the birds are flying.


After a long snowy winter the first bird calls and that seems to wake Everything up the chipmunks yawn their cute little yawns. a goose Is back thats meaning the birds are flying back, the deer are back Grazing on sweet summer grass and the chickadees are going " Chickadee dee dee " as the moose fall asleep, 
The wolves are Tired and hungry as they try to hunt and the stags Are showing off. The small young fawn is now a stag and has a group of girl deer. They follow him up into the vast and vanish from sight. His mother Calls and stumbles down till she is under a tree. A hawk comes Flying over head and follows a hare that hides. I hope that when the Winter comes the birds will fly and the deer will make their Migration, and the chipmunks will hibernate again.



The End.

2 comments:

  1. Wow what a beautiful poem Frida. You have a lot of knowledge about these animals, their habitat and the changes in the seasons. Where did you get your inspiration from? I like would your first paragraph is four lines. CHALLENGE: check our last paragraph for full stops and capital letters in the right places. Can you make it into two smaller paragraphs (they are called Stanzas in poems).

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  2. Hi Frida:
    How beautiful!
    I can see the animals and hear the sounds of nature when I read this poem. The way you describe the cycle of the seasons using the animal changes makes me think of New Zealand and Canada. I see you included one of your favourite animals, the wolf.






    You have shown the cycle of the seasons which are even more extreme for us. I see you included one of your favourites, the wolf.

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